Which of the following sentences is properly edited and written in a clear and concise
style?
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there are many kinds of editing strategies. giving sentences content is one example.
of the many kinds of editing strategies that are out there for writers to try out is the one where
they can give more content to their sentences that need to be revised if that sentence does not
have enough detail.
o providing more content in a sentence is one type of editing strategy.
there are many kinds of editing strategies out there, and one of the strategies that is out there
is giving the sentence more content.