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(30 pts) one of your classmates has asked you to her revise a speech that she will be giving about the importance of family. revise her speech in the following ways:

1)make the speech formal.
2)add instructions to indicate where the visual images should be shown to audience, choosing images from the ones below. (for example, [show image of fireworks].) be sure to select at least two of the images, and make sure that they're relevant and .
3)make the details more specific to strengthen the speech. you may add supporting details as needed, even if you make them up.

note: underline any lines you copy from her original speech.

speech text draft:

some people may think that a family is just a boring group of people they are related to. family is an important group of people, in my opinion. one reason i love my family is they've got my back when times get tough. one time i fell off my bike when i was a little kid and i broke my leg. i was hurting real bad and had to be in the hospital for a long time. over a month long. my dad, mom, and kid sister came to see me every day. they brought me stuff to keep my busy: books, games, magazines, we watched tv. my family supported me. families are great!

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