I'm going to be writing a descriptive essay about my favorite place. any pointers on how i should write it. any good words to improve my writing?

answer: give details of the place

explanation: people animals and another thing is describe why do you like that place how makes you feel that place i like the forest because the animals and that place makes me feel peace

answer:

take time to brainstorm

if your instructor asks you to describe your favorite food, make sure that you jot down some ideas before you begin describing it. for instance, if you choose pizza, you might start by writing down a few words: sauce, cheese, crust, pepperoni, sausage, spices, hot, melted, etc.

use clear and concise language.

this means that words are chosen carefully, particularly for their relevancy in relation to that which you are intending to describe.

choose vivid language.

why use horse when you can choose stallion? why not use tempestuous instead of violent? or why not miserly in place of cheap?

use your senses!

remember, if you are describing something, you need to be appealing to the senses of the reader. explain how the thing smelled, felt, sounded, tasted, or looked. embellish the moment with senses.

what were you thinking? !

if you can describe emotions or feelings related to your topic, you will connect with the reader on a deeper level. many have felt crushing loss in their lives, or ecstatic joy, or mild complacency.

leave the reader with a clear impression.

one of your goals is to evoke a strong sense of familiarity and appreciation in the reader. if your reader can walk away from the essay craving the very pizza you just described, you are on your way to writing effective descriptive essays.

be organized!

it is easy to fall into an incoherent rambling of emotions and senses when writing a descriptive essay. however, you must strive to present an organized and logical description

make the person wanna go to the place you are describing! it will make your essay even better then you think it does

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the sentence that best describes the tone of the passage from the radio broadcast compared to the passage from the book is b. the radio broadcast has a more surprised tone.

consider the text evidence: in the passage from the book, the description is more matter-of-fact. it is simply describing the things resembling little grey snakes, but there is no urgency in the description. on the other hand, in the passage from the radio broadcast, there is definetely urgency (you can tell from the expression used, "good heavens", which clearly indicates surprise.)