Is this a good introduction?

video games put an effect on peoples lives, and a lot of people enjoy playing video games. the first ever video games was called “tennis” and after that video games were becoming a big thing. when video games were introduced to the world, every kid and teen loved it, and people would play them all the time. according to many people, video games has child’s growth from video games and has learning.

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Explanation:

You should open with an attention grabbing line, then you claim, some background then hint at what the rest of your writing is about not necessarily with facts though, then you can start the first paragraph

I would say everyone instead of "every kid and teen", I would also take away "according to some people" You should not put site sources in an intro. you could just say "video games have tremendously helped the growth of children's brain, they can learn so many things with video games." or something like that! Hope this helps :)

Explanation:

first of all wood chucks don't "chuck" wood. none, and for the fun of the answer the amount of wood chucked would be a lot!

explanation:

a wood chuck is a ground hog, it belongs to the family of large underground squirrels. it belongs to the family of marmots. ground hogs eat grasses, berry's, and other vegetation.

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