Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. which sections of his review contain constructive feedback?

1)my favorite part of the essay was when you described your grandmother's reaction after finding the frog in her purse because it was so funny and so vivid.
2)however, i thought that the section with the pie-eating contest wasn’t very interesting. it just made me want to stop reading the essay.

3)i would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to.
4)you should change is the ending. i didn't understand it at all.
what was your grandmother doing with that blanket?
5) i don't usually like essays with lame endings like this one.

no

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.