Read the body paragraph that misaki wrote
(1) monopolies had a negative impact because having just one company controlling each industry limited competition (2)
for example, industrialist john d. rockefeller formed standard oil trust and monopolized 90 percent of the oil industry (3)
critics argue that merging smaller companies into one large company creates stronger corporations (4) however, having
just one strong corporation can lead to corruption. (5) in the case of standard oil trust, the company was accused of
bullying smaller businesses and competitors. (6) one unfortunate outcome of the industrial revolution was the creation of
monopolies
what change in organization should misaki make when she revises the paragraph?
sentence 2 should be the first sentence.
sentence 3 should be the last sentence.
sentence 4 should be the last sentence.
sentence 6 should be the first sentence,