answer asap: so, i am writing a compare and contrast essay on least and most favorite subjects and my teacher said "this is a sloppy copy make improvements" but idk what "improvements" to make clearly this teacher is an idiot i tried my best so, i need someone to me look at my essay and rewrite it for me asap ? i will give brain and 50 points i will also give brain notice: if you type random answer just to get points you are reported and your answer will get removed i already had to ask the same question 5 times) to the people who are trying to say "i don't see anything wrong with it" stop! this is my freaking 10th time rewriting this! i just need ! you! if you don't know just skip!