Atwo-year old horse called 'okinawa' became an integral part of the equine unit, quickly learning to lead a parade with flags
flapping, jets flying overhead, audiences clapping and dealing with unexpected loud noises
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which is the most clear and concise revision of this sentence?
a two-year-old horse called 'okinawa' became an integral part of the
equine unit with flags flapping, jets flying and at the same time audiences
clapping and dealing with unexpected noises.
a two-year-old horse called 'okinawa' became an integral part of the
equine unit. he quickly learned to lead a parade with flags flapping, jets
flying overhead, audiences clapping and dealing with loud noises.
a two-year-old horse called "okinawa' became an integral part of the
equine unit, quickly learning to lead a parade with flags flapping, jets
flying overhead, audiences clapping while dealing with unexpected loud
noises.
a two-year-old horse called 'okinawa' became an integral part of the
equine unit after he quickly learned to deal with such distractions as flags
flapping, jets flying overhead, audiences clapping, and unexpected loud
noises.

Announcer two: ladies and gentlemen, following on the news given in our bulletin a moment ago, the government meteorological bureau has requested the large observatories of the country to keep an astronomical watch on any further disturbances occurring on the planet mars. due to the unusual nature of this occurrence, we have arranged an interview with noted astronomer professor pierson, who will give us his views on the event. in a few moments we will take you to the princeton observatory at princeton, new jersey. we return you until then to the music of ramón raquello and his orchestra. the passage is from the transcript of the radio adaptation of the war of the worlds by h. g. wells. instead of including expert interviews, h. g. wells uses a narrator to tell about an alien invasion that occurred a few years earlier. by including expert interviews, how does the radio broadcast change the story most effectively? o.a. it puts the story in the past tense, increasing its personal tone. o o b. it makes the broadcast sound more like a fictional story. o o c. it makes the broadcast sound like a news report. o d. it makes the story sound less believable by changing who presents the story's details.