Which of the following sentences is best written?
my favorite day of the year is july 24 my birthday.
my favorite day, of the year, is july 24 my birthday.
my favorite day of the year is july 24th—my birthday.
my favorite day of the year is (july 24) my birthday.

Of the following sentences that which is best written is: My favorite day of the year is July 24th—my birthday.

This sentence is best written because it uses punctuation accurately.

After stating the main point which is the fact that July 24th is the speaker's favorite day of the year, a hyphen was used to introduce additional information.

The additional information is that July 24th is the speaker's birthday.

So, this option C uses punctuations correctly.

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the answer is b. my dude