Which of the following statements uses a subjective tone?

a: “i continued to decline until at length the ship became entirely ineffectual.”
b: “i had received no medicine.”
c: “i was unable to leave my cabin.”
d: “i was attacked with chills.”

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

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