Which concluding sentence best reflects the writer's voice?
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i know it doesn't sound like much, but am psyched about
the school fundraiser this spring. we are sponsoring a
slam-dunk contest (on an eight-foot rim) for local middle
schoolers. we're charging an entry fee for participants that
will cover our costs, and we'll charge admission at the
door! three dollars per person—ka-ching! six of my
neighbors have already said they are coming. i mean, who
wouldn't come? participants will wear their school jerseys,
and all their friends will come to cheer!
the contest will take place in the liberty middle school
gym, and the maximum capacity is 250 spectators.
the contest promises to enrich our community as a
variety of schools unite to support our fundraising effort.
it will be sweet, because the band is providing music in
the stands, and the dance squad is performing.
students' enthusiasm for this endeavor has blossomed,
and it will reach full flower as the contest approaches.
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