Read this sentence from chapter one of jack london’s the call of the wild.

buck rushed at the splintering wood, sinking his teeth into it, surging and wrestling with it. wherever the hatchet fell on the outside, he was there on the inside, snarling and growling, as furiously anxious to get out as the man in the red sweater was calmly intent on getting him out.

what is a good prediction question to ask after reading this excerpt?

a. why is the man using a hatchet to open the cage?
b. what will happen when buck and the man interact?
c. who will introduce buck to the man in the red sweater?
d. where did buck learn the aggressive behavior he’s showing?

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.