Hi people! : ) as my assignment for english class i had to write a poem about anything. (literally) it could either be personal not. whichever would be fine. -don't judge my poem , you.
here you go:
i was sick, i remember the day i caught loneliness. it was the day i lost part of me. i was confused to why. it lay like a stone in my lap. no matter how hard i tried being happy, prying, tearing, it simply would not go away. i remained a pebble, lost in this world so vast and uncaring, cast aside, passed by, left astray. i took steps to destroy it before it zapped me, crushed me, left me victim. i pulled harder, ripping that stone right from my sadden heart and threw it all back into the void from where it
yes, i had thrown loneliness away.

let me know how good or bad this was. was it okay do i need to work on something? (be specific and explain yourself) you! : )