Who can turn this into their own word pls

“this article focuses on how athlete jackie robinson broke the color barrier in major league baseball in 1947. the heroic details have often been repeated of how robinson joined the brooklyn dodgers and challenge segregation in all aspects of american life. relatively few people, however, know that baseball thrived in african american communities in the 50 years prior to that historic event. while this story is just as crucial, it is, perhaps, more difficult to understand. in 1868, the national association of baseball players had forbidden membership to any team or club that included "colored" ballplayers.”

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

theres no poem include that

gold miners!

explanation:

i believe that is the truth if thats what you where asking for