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English, 07.01.2020 23:31 rizha55

Sooo i've been writing poetry. nobody really understands me. i always seem to hurt people and make people upset at so writing me to express my thoughts. let me know what you think of my poem. btw, its a sonnet. comment if you understand what i'm going through.

the sadness i drain in my pillow,
day after day, it’s all the same.
oh sorrow, i must throw
but where shall i aim?
found deep in the heart,
is where the enemy is found,
is where the darkness that must depart;
and where happiness is drowned.
i tug at the stone of loneliness,
but i never seem to win.
it’s venom is so poisonous,
i shall hide it, and put on a grin.
i try to fight my opponent, depression,
but it grips me as it’s possession.

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