Hello read this poem plz
i wrote it tell me what you think plz?

what is love with you

it is like a blossom in my heart
and you always make me smile,
so now it is time that i do my part
and put in that extra mile.

i have loved you the moment you came
i wanted to swoop you under your feet-
but i never knew i would be such a shame,
but now i won’t skip a beat,
and this will never be the same.

what is love with you?
it is like sitting in a pot of stew,
it’s so warm and feels like home,
but now i want to be ur dome,
i want you to feel at home too.

Read the excerpt from the war of the worlds, in which the first martian exits the spacecraft.a sudden chill came over me. there was a loud shriek from a woman behind. i half turned, keeping my eyes fixed upon the cylinder still, from which other tentacles were now projecting, and began pushing my way back from the edge of the pit. i saw astonishment giving place to horror on the faces of the people about me. i looked again at the cylinder, and ungovernable terror gripped me. i stood petrified and staring.what option accurately analyzes the impact of the narrator's thoughts and actions on the tone of the excerpt? the war of the worldsa disdainful tone is created as the narrator ponders the ugliness of the tentacles and turns to the shrieking woman.a melancholy tone is created by the narrator's thoughts of fear and refusal to avert his eyes.a tone of determination is created when the narrator thinks of escape and backs away from the edge of the pit.a fearful tone is created through the narrator's thoughts of horror and his glance at the cylinder.