Which statement should be revised for a more formal tone?

greek mythology was created as a way for ancient people to explain the world around them.
roman mythology was comparable in many ways to greek mythology, although different names were used.
poseidon, the coolest of the greek gods, ruled the seas with his awesome tri-tip fish spear.
the story of persephone’s capture by hades was used to explain the annual change of seasons.

Poseidon, the coolest of the Greek gods, ruled the seas with his awesome tri-tip fish spear.

Formal tone does not include opinion statements. In this sentence the author's use of the words "coolest" and "awesome" create an informal tone that make this sentence inappropriate for a formal writing task. The author would need to revise the sentence to eliminate these words. If showing Poseidon's coolness and the spear's awesomeness is important to the author, he would need to use specific examples to let the readers come to that conclusion themselves.

1.creeping like a snail is a simile used in this poem and it means the child is going to school unwillingly./a child is unwilling to go to school.

2. man becomes very frail and loses his physical strength when he becomes old, so much that his leggings that used to fit him snugly when he was in his youth are now too loose for him to wear, and that his shank has shrunk so much that this worldly stage is too big for a feeble actor like him. although, 'his youthful hose' just refers to his leggings/pants/ to shrink from danger; to shrink from contact.

3.the words "sans" means "without." it is a french word that is often used in english even today. so he is saying that in the last age of a man, the man is without eyes, taste, or anything else. he also says that this is the "last stage of all" and that it is the stage that ends a man's "history."

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