Which line from daly's "sixteen" best conveys the narrator's feeling of longing?

"I can't think of anything, anything but snowflakes and ice skates and yellow moon and Thursday night."

Explanation:

This question is not full as it is missing the option for the answer.

The options are:

The correct answer is 4. "I can't think of anything, anything but snowflakes and ice skates and yellow moon and Thursday night."

In this line, the narrator of Daly's novel talks about details she remembers dearly from the night she meets the man she is longing for. She remembers it was Thursday, she remembers the snow and the skating and saying she can't think of anything else but these details. With this description of the exact details of the night, the narrator shows how much she remembers, how important the night was to her, and how much she wishes to return to it.

The first two options, 1 and 2, are describing the events from the night, and the 3 is just what is happening in the present tense. But in the sentence under option 4 we can see the full strength of her longing and strong emotions.

in the shadow of war

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.