Excerpt from the value of volunteering
matthew ramirez
jose tried to draw on his volunteering experiences to him think of an activity for the committee josé reminisced about the
time he doled out piping hot meals at a soup kitchen he contemplated the time he and his dad had planted lush, green trees in
the park, suddenly. josé recalled another volunteering experience. a number of years ago, he and his family had volunteered at
the bristol county animal shelter white volunteering there, jose had prepared food, washed animals, and cleaned the cages. he
remembered that it was one of his favorite volunteering experiences
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which sentence is an appropriate and effective thesis for a persuasive essay on the topic of volunteerism?
the last time i volunteered at the local animal shelter, i adopted a dog to
be my pet
nina tried to raise money for the community park by selling fruits and
vegetables
giving back to the community through volunteering is important and
satisfying
when i was young, my mother and father taught me the value of
volunteering
submit

Giving back to the community through volunteering is important and  satisfying

Explanation:

A thesis statement or topic should be some claim, an idea. It should not include personal pronouns and nouns, apart from some famous persons, politicians, scientists, writer etc. The topic should be such that it gives a useful insight into what is going to be the content of the theses or persuasive essay.

The first, second and fourth options are incorrect because they are not claims or ideas and they include pronouns and nouns which are not famous.

explanation:

the intellectual community is a place like a university where people with high marks, or original thought or an outstanding interest in something gather. they take classes together. they discuss things. they argue sometimes, and not always in a friendly way. but if they argue, it is because they are passionate about something, and there is nothing the matter with that.

lately i've been hearing rumors that it is not the way it was when i went to school. the one thing all schools used to have was free speech. the 1st amendment rights were sacred. now i'm hearing they are not. students can be reported and disciplined for giving an off the wall opinion.

that is shameful.

intellectual ideas are meant to be discussed. they are meant to be chewed up and worked on. that is the primary responsibility of every intellectual community. if that is not the way it is, then that is not a school to go to.

social media, in my opinion, and this is just an opinion. i wouldn't take it too seriously, complicates everything to do with human communication. you can want to share things and others feel they have the right to be very critical or sarcastic or mean about what you share. lack of respect is an immeasurable intolerable condition and social media abounds with that sort of thing.

one of the things i really like about is how careful people are because they must have some idea that the mods are exactly what the word says they are. they police this board very well, and what is so remarkable about them is that they are no older than the average grade 12 student.

my hat goes off to them (which means i respect them quite a bit).