Visiting officials, who have not signed in at the registration desk, will not receive their admission tickets in time for tonight's performance.

Which correctly explains how to revise this sentence?

A) The two commas should be deleted.
B) The apostrophe should be deleted.
C) The first comma should be deleted.
D) The apostrophe should be placed after the s.

d becuase khgfdwhat effect does the word head have on the meaning of this passage?

a. it demonstrates how intelligent he was.

b. it shows he was a favorite of the teachers.

c. it indicates he would be a good preacher.

d. it reveals how self-important he was.

how does the choice of the word head contribute to the passage’s tone?

a. it offers a sense of entitlement.

nature versus humanity!

awnser: alliteration, assonance, onomatopoeia.

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