Read this excerpt from a research paper: Curfews have been used effectively in many town to reduce crime. High school sophomore Mandy Jenkins says, "My parents don't really make me follow the curfew." Some towns report lower crime rates simply because of the location (such as a rural community). Which revision criterion could be used to improve this excerpt

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the underline word is basically like a prepositional phrase.