Your coworker has asked you for feedback on a department memo she has written help your coworker revise her Memo by identifying and describing three things that cannot be improved

Explanation:

Dear Coworker,

I am writing this in order to share my feedback on your  department memorandum that you had written.

Overall this is a good memo but you can make it slightly better if you adapt below points;

While rewriting you shouldn't change following things

I hope this little feedback will be valuable feedback

Refer below for the answer.

Explanation:

To: Coworker

From: ABC

Date: March 10, 2020

Subject: Feedback for memo

After a careful consideration, the memo is good enough but need some of initial mistakes to be corrected, while revising the Memo I identify three things that shouldn't be improve. See below:

● The main reason for writing the memo.

● The audience for the memo.

● The objective tone.

Hope this helps you out. Looking forward for the good one.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)