The author is considering changing sentence 1 of paragraph 4 to read:
The same morning that Mrs. Bullfrog and I came together and got hitched, me and her took two seats in the stage coach and
began our journey towards my place of business.
The proposed revision would not be good because it
A)
changes the point of view of the passage.
changes the chronological order of events.
puts too much emphasis on the fact that they got married.
D)
adds informal language that is inconsistent with the passage.