Could someone help correct all grammar issue or if you could change something in my small essay.
"Recently I watched a program where was a story about a girl in the USA. This woman had problems with obesity. She had weight problems as a child, but her parents didn’t do anything. She didn’t eat much food but was getting fat. People laughed at this girl and her weight. One day She read an article about sport and how beneficial it is. The turning point for her was that it became very difficult for her to walk and she decided to change her life. After this situation, she went to the doctor. The doctor gave her a diet and said often for a walk. Her weight was 157kg. She kept a diet and tried to do sports. It was very difficult for her, but she did not give up. Gradually, she began to lose weight and was happy about it. The doctor increased the load. Then she underwent surgery to reduce the stomach. She had surgery well, although she was very afraid. After surgery, it became easier for her to lose weight. She worked hard and got her way - she began to weigh 65 kg. She told her story on a program to show how important sports and healthy food are in our lives, by example. Sport plays a big role in our life. Sport is a good means of struggling with stress. In my opinion, sport is important for healthy free time. Sport also makes people strong and prepares a lot of joy. To wrap up, you need to play sports and then everything will be fine."

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Read the passage. excerpt from "why equal pay is worth fighting for" by senator elizabeth warren, april 17, 2014 i honestly can't believe that we're still arguing over equal pay in 2014. when i started teaching elementary school after college, the public school district didn't hide the fact that it had two pay scales: one for men and one for women. women have made incredible strides since then. but 40 years later, we're still debating equal pay for equal work. women today still earn only 77 cents for every dollar a man earns, and they're taking a hit in nearly every occupation. bloomberg analyzed census data and found that median earnings for women were lower than those for men in 264 of 265 major occupation categories. in 99.6 percent of occupations, men get paid more than women. that's not an accident; that's discrimination. the effects of this discrimination are real, and they are long lasting. today, more young women go to college than men, but unequal pay makes it harder for them to pay back student loans. pay inequality also means a tougher retirement for women. . for middle-class families today, it usually takes two incomes to get by, and many families depend as much on mom's salary as they do on dad's, if not more. women are the main breadwinners, or joint breadwinners, in two-thirds of the families across the country, and pay discrimination makes it that much harder for these families to stay afloat. women are ready to fight back against pay discrimination, but it's not easy. today, a woman can get fired for asking the guy across the hall how much money he makes. here in the senate, sen. barbara mikulski (d-md.) introduced the paycheck fairness act to give women the tools to combat wage discrimination. it would ensure that salary differences have something to do with the actual job that they are doing, and not just because they are women. senator warren states that the effects of pay discrimination are long-lasting. is this a valid argument supported by accurate evidence? no; warren weakens her point by claiming that the paycheck fairness act would "give women the tools to combat wage discrimination." yes; warren supports her point by noting, "for middle-class families today, it usually takes two incomes to get by." yes; warren supports her point by noting, "pay inequality also means a tougher retirement for women." no; warren weakens her point by noting, "today, a woman can get fired for asking the guy across the hall how much money he makes."