Molly is revising her narrative, a science fiction story about a disaster on a space station. This is her opening paragraph.

Sheba settled into her pod and clicked the safety belts into place. A gentle hum announced the closing of the pod door. Sheba closed her eyes and let herself drift to sleep. When she awoke, the ship would be at its destination, the Mars XIV outpost, and the great adventure she’d been dreaming about for a decade would finally begin.

How can Molly revise her narrative to better engage the reader?

A.
She can add more events to the rising action to build suspense before revealing the climax of the story.
B.
She can add more details about the spaceship to make sure readers know the story takes place in the future.
C.
She can change the narrator from third-person limited to third-person omniscient so the reader learns more about the other characters in the story.
D.
She can begin with the climax of the story, an explosion on the space station, to draw in the reader and then use flashbacks to explain the events that led to the explosion.

idk im sorry well i am new at this so im trying

what motivates odysseus to tell a lie to the cyclops

love, how my life is right now. you can be loved and can love others. sometimes you dont feel loved right now, dont worry, someone out there is loving you while you are away.

i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and walked in with his head held high.

1. he leaned on the wall and observed me carefully.

2. his harsh scrutiny made me self-conscious of my skills in the lab.

3. perhaps it was just me, but the air in the laboratory began to thicken as i found myself having difficulty to breathe.

4. i turned to look at him fully as i mentally prepared myself for what my very first words would be to thomas edison.

5. the next couple of seconds shocked me. it wasn't me who spoke, but rather him and with diction i could never think of using in a simple sentence.

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hey, sorry if this was bad, i really didn't know what to write but i wanted to you. is there anything that you had to include within the excerpt?