HELP ASAP
Zach turned in an essay on humpback whales. His teacher
explained the main message was unclear.

How should he revise his paper?
He should develop the paper's controlling idea.
He should write a new paper on a different topic.
He should restructure the paper by moving paragraphs.
He should make the tone of the paper much more
formal.

What is the relationship between paragraph 2 paragraph 3 through 29?

Our coach’s idea of food for the entire wrestling team was tiny sandwiches and fruit.

Which statement best describes how these paragraphs develop the central idea of the article? a- they elaborate on the idea that the offer has been made with youngsters in mind. b- they provide additional information as to why the prize is a wagon instead of something else. c- they support the idea that the wagon is attractive to youngsters and is a worthy prize. d- they introduce the idea that the newspaper is a generous organization. read paragraphs 4 and 5. the disc wheel coaster wagon is thirty-six inches long and sixteen inches wide. the coaster is built exactly like a high-powered automobile. the disc wheels have rubber tires and true roller bearings. it runs as smoothly as an eight-cylinder automobile. it is built of the strongest wood and is equipped with a reliable hand brake, enabling the owner to stop in an instant. the tongue—usually the first thing about a wagon to break and render the wagon unserviceable—is so stout that a man can jump on it without breaking it.