Read this excerpt from a speech given at a city council meeting:
The city council's proposed ban on plastic bags is
definitely not the way to go. What about the smaller
grocery stores that don't have the money to replace plastic
with the more expensive paper bags? Their profit margins
are already razor thin compared to the bigger
supermarkets. The city council members who support this
ban should be voted out of office during the next election.
Which change is the best revision to reflect a formal tone for the speech's
audience?