How should Kirsten revise the email to improve the
organization of ideas?
Subject: Water Issue in Lower Dauphin County
Dear Senator Thomas,
Thank you for your hard work on behalf of the citizens of
our community. The purpose of this email is to bring the
issue of water quality to your attention. A state
commission could investigate this issue, document
problems, and suggest solutions if necessary.
Several citizens in Lower Dauphin County have reported
discolored water and foul smells coming from their
faucets. Personal water quality tests have found elevated
levels of lead in the water. Local officials have refused to
do further testing.
I did some research on the pipes in the area, and I could
not believe that they were so old! Some of them were
installed in 1910! I bet they are leaking lead! Further,
there have been complaints that a local welding company
may be dumping metals into the Choctaw River. The
company denied this to a local journalist.
by stating the solution of appointing a commission
after stating the problems
3 by writing in the last sentence that local officials
have refused to do testing, for emphasis
O by putting the reference to discolored water in the
first sentence to get the reader's attention
O by moving the complaints about the welding
company to the first sentence for emphasis

A) by stating the solution of appointing a commission after stating the problems

Explanation: Did the assignment

each year on this day, i make it a point to listen to dr. martin luther king jr.’s great “i have a dream” speech. it’s electrifying every single time.

the content of dr. king’s speech, his inspiring presence, and the moment in history all came together to make the iconic “i have a dream” speech the defining moment of the american civil rights movement. but there are several other reasons why this speech, delivered over 50 years ago, remains an example of one of the best speeches in american history.

since part of my job is to people become better presenters, i’ve noticed several techniques that we can all learn from and be inspired by in this magnificent speech.

it’s anchored in a powerful related location

in most cases, you can’t handpick the spot to give a presentation, as mlk did for supreme symbolic effect when he stood on the steps of the lincoln memorial and echoed the opening words of the gettysburg address (“five score years ago . . ). but you absolutely can amplify your message by adapting it to your setting and location.

b)metaphor

explanation:

when reading the sentence carefully it says,"hope is a thing with feathers" it's like saying: hope is a thing like feathers

get what i'm saying? instead of using a smilie like or as they use "with"

it would be nice enough if i got .