Compare the original ending with the version in which
most of the vivid language has been taken out. Write
three to four sentences explaining how the original
version helps you visualize and understand the poem's
story

Explanation:

Sample Response:

The version with vivid language is more interesting. I can see the main character playing the game and hear him shouting. I can feel the pain in his forehead and the tugging at his cap. The language connects with my senses in a way that makes the story seem real.