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The mental disorder I have chosen is depression. The reason that I chose this disorder is that it is so common, yet not everyone knows the symptoms or gets proper treatment for it. Medication such as Prestic and Khedezla are serotonin-norepinephrine reuptake inhibitors which are newer medications than selective serotonin reuptake inhibitors. These medications increase the amount of serotonin our body produces which increases how good we feel. Some of the benefits of taking this medication are that your depression is lessened or even eventually gone. the mood changes will be that our happier and less anxious. Common side effects of SNRIs are nausea, dry mouth, dizziness, headaches, and excessive sweating.

I think people often avoid telling people of depression can vary from many different reasons; like they don't feel like they would be treated differently or people worry bout them, another reason may be that since society has an impression of that having depression means you are weak or you have nothing to be sad about. I do not believe that all these people are trying to be mean but instead, I think it is ignorance, I think this because people don't always educate themselves properly they go by what someone has told them in a movie instead of going online and looking at the facts such as It's not the person's fault that they feel this way I could be chemical imbalance like low serotonin. This simple fact of false information is an easy fix with either a simple google search or people raise awareness of it so people don't feel like they are alone. According to healthline. com 16.2 million people in the U. S alone have a depressive episode a year!

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Expand the outline you wrote in lesson 1 about the american dream into an argumentative research essay. as in most essays, you'll need to include an introduction, body, and conclusion. you'll also need to support your claim with evidence

Adapt the speech you delivered in lesson 2 to an audience of professionals, teachers, and parents. the audience expects a more formal delivery. your listeners also expect you to use media such as images and audio to make your speech more convincing and easier to understand. your assignment should include the following elements: -at least four sources to back up your ideas -media elements to illustrate your ideas -changes to both the style and content of the speech to make it more appropriate to the audience -citations that follow mla guidelines as you revise your presentation, research and cite at least four sources. at least two of these sources must provide supporting evidence, such as charts and graphs or quotes from newspapers or other credible sources. the other two sources can provide material to grab the audience's attention — for example, photos that your audience visualize what you're talking about or music that sets the mood. you can also create original images, but these will not count as sources. here are some types of media that you may use to either show evidence or move the audience: quotes tables, charts, and graphs images video audio (including music) mix up the types of media you use so that no medium is used more than twice. take care that all your sources contribute to your speech in an obvious way. they should either back up what you're saying or make your ideas easier for your audience to understand logically or emotionally. avoid visual aids that are off topic or confusing. ask yourself these questions as you revise: am i still fulfilling the requirements of the speech i gave in lesson 2? is my speech still about a theme in franklin roosevelt's four freedoms speech? do i connect that theme to my own life and to a current issue? are my sources credible and relevant? will they convince an audience of parents, teachers, and professionals? do my media elements enhance my speech? do they set the mood, explain something difficult, or offer convincing proof? do i avoid media elements that are more distracting than ? did i cite my sources according to mla guidelines? did i check my works-cited page against sample works-cited pages to make sure it's correct?