Kelsey is an engineering student at Lafayette College in which revision of the underlined sentences creates a
Easton, Pennsylvania. For her senior project, she and her parallel structure within the paragraph?
team are designing a robotic device to help children with
disabilities play a musical instrument. They selected the Because the recorder is familiar, children feel
recorder. The recorder has several advantages over other
veral advantages over other comfortable playing it.
instruments. The recorder is plastic, making it low cost
The recorder is familiar, helping children feel more
and durable. The recorder is small, allowing it to be held
comfortable playing it.
easily. Another advantage is that many people are
familiar with the recorder. So children feel more
People are familiar with the recorder, which creates
comfortable playing it.
comfort for children.
O Musical instruments need to feel comfortable to
children if we expect them to try to play.

Read the excerpt from the land. in the late afternoon i did the same, but all the time i was on the stallion, i was aware that mitchell was watching me. he had appeared on the edge of the woods and had just stood there watching ghost wind and me as we went round and round the meadow. finally, on one of our turns past him, he said: "s'pose you thinkin' you a real somebody 'cause you can ride that stallion." i looked down at mitchell and stopped, knowing that despite our understanding, he was itching for a fight with me. now, i don't know what possessed me in that moment to say the next thing i did. maybe i was feeling guilty that because i was my daddy's son, i could ride ghost wind. maybe it was that, but it wasn't out of fear i said what i said. i no longer was afraid of mitchell. "you want to ride him? " i asked. mitchell took a step backward. it was obvious he hadn't expected me to say that. "you know i can't ride him," he said. "your white daddy'd kill me." "you want to ride him? " i asked again. mitchell looked at the stallion, then at me. "so, what if i do? " what intrinsic motivation does the author most likely intend the reader to infer from the passage? paul is motivated by his need to have mitchell praise his riding skills. mitchell is motivated by his need to have paul praise his riding skills. paul is motivated by jealousy and wishes he had free time like mitchell. mitchell is motivated by jealousy and wishes he could ride the horse.

On a scale 1 to 10 how responsible are you? explain your answer

In january 2014 and i started 1 million pennies project she put donation jars in school and shops and set up a webpage to of said donations online her gold was to collect 1 million pennies or 1000 chandra’s planned to give the money to a group called growing food for the group plant gardens and deliver the products it grows to people in need