What are the errors/grammatical lapses found in this essay?
my favorite car

all people dream of having their own car, and i am not an exception. i have one dream to get a good job and earn money, good money, so i will be able to buy my dream car, the bmw m3 in black or white. i really like it! it is my favorite sports car. it has a good shape, especially from the front, which looks perfect. it's strong and can take hard hits without sustaining much damage. bmw has always been a symbol of speed and prestige and elegance. it has even been described as a ‘passion on wheels’. the design elements of the bmw are all made with style in mind. it has powerful and responsive engines, improved braking systems. bmw is headquartered in munich, bavaria and germany. i like this car because it looks like a car that i could ride around in having a good time with. this car has tremendous speed reaching up to 185 mph and higher. this car is very nice and has great control on the road and it is a convertible so you could really have fun in it. that is why i like the bmw. as you can see, bmw is a great car. this car is liked all across the world and i think you can see why. the people that would like this car are people that are outgoing and like speed.

Hmm it is overall good but there are a few issues with it. I will tell you what needs to be edited on this. Just proof read this for grammar issues and you should be fine. Its very well written and my teacher, as a side not told me to never use "you" in an essay. Alright, thats all I have to say, and an excellent job u did there :D

everyday, people all over the world are making sacrifices; all for different reasons. some people may choose to do more simple sacrifices, like, "my daughter is receiving an award at school, but i also have an appointment, so i will decide to cancel that appointment to be there with my daughter" although she is cancelling her appointment, she can easily reschedule it, and spend her time with nore important thungs in life: being there with her daughter. this will make her daughter happy too because she is recieveing an award for her hard work, and it brings us happiness when our hard work is noticed and appreciated.

on the other hand, some people dont know when to make a sacrifice, ir bow to make one. well, making a sacrifice is when you do something for someone else other than yourself, for someone else's happiness, not so you can gain something in return. you do it for them, not for you. so, anyone can make a sacrifice, even the most simplest ones, like giving up the tv for a sibling or a sibling with homework, when you could be doing something else. the point is to others, when you can be doing something else. you do it out of the fact that you want to them, not so that it can benefit you.

making sacrifices benefit people in many ways, it can bring a smile to there face knowing someone is willing to and bring kindess. alot of people tend to feel unwanted and that no one is there for them, but if we show kindess and sacrifice the less importnat things in life for the most important things in life, people will once again feel happiness and more at ease knowing that someone is or was there for them, even if it be only once.

hope this , and let me know if there are any typos, it's hard typing on a phone : )

the reason some people sacrifice their own life for another person's life could be that they are in love with them and would do anything to keep them safe a protected even if that means risking their life in the process