Which is the best revision for the conclusion?
An argumentative essay ends with the conclusion below.
In conclusion, collecting comic books is a fun hobby.
Collecting comic books is an affordable way to enjoy
pop art and invest in memorabilia. Which series will you
start to collect?
My favorite comic book character is the Yellow Storm
because she is so bold and powerful Who is your
favorite character?
The first comic books were printed in the 1930s and
became popular in the United States Did you know that
they are also popular in Japan?
People enjoy collecting comic books because the prices
range from expensive to very affordable. How much
would you be willing to spend?
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often a noun phrase is just a noun or a pronoun:

people like to have money.

i am tired.

it is getting late.

isn't this axel talking to his uncle?

i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and walked in with his head held high.

1. he leaned on the wall and observed me carefully.

2. his harsh scrutiny made me self-conscious of my skills in the lab.

3. perhaps it was just me, but the air in the laboratory began to thicken as i found myself having difficulty to breathe.

4. i turned to look at him fully as i mentally prepared myself for what my very first words would be to thomas edison.

5. the next couple of seconds shocked me. it wasn't me who spoke, but rather him and with diction i could never think of using in a simple sentence.

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hey, sorry if this was bad, i really didn't know what to write but i wanted to you. is there anything that you had to include within the excerpt?

the answer is b) ''i hereby express my profound remorse together with my sincere mourning ''.

the reason being that although all of the options provided are valid the main idea of the speech by prime minister junichiro koizumi is to express his and japan's current antiwar pledge.

he states that 59 years had passed since the war, he acknowledges the 3 million japanese that lost their lives during the war and those countries who were affected by their decisions, as well as the way japan intends to develop relationships across the globe however all of this can be summarize to how japan as a whole regrets the war and its consecuences.

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