I need a paragraph about online shooping

Online shopping can be useful in many ways. There are pros and cons to the subject. Some of the pros are that you don't need to go out and shop. You can just stay in the comfort of your own home. Some cons are that shopping can be more expensive. Such as the shipping can add more onto your bill of whatever you are buying. Online shopping pros are that there are more stuff to buy on a website you are on than any store you walk into. Another con on online shopping is that you can spend too much money. Some people get carried away and add too many stuff to there cart which can add up to thousands of dollars.

Explanation:

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

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