Sapnu puas! What does this mean can you send it?

How can the passage best be revised to eliminate logical fallacies and improve clarity

What is the best way to improve the conclusion? add a sentence to the ending that summarizes the writer’s topic. add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writer’s experiences. revise the final sentence to have a different tone. revise the first sentence to state a future goal.

1according to the passage, carol-ann normandin had all of the following symptoms except