Read the paragraph.
Which revision should be made to this paragraph?
(1) Wordsworth believed that poetry should include
emotional experiences, and his poem " Wandered Lonely as
a Cloud" includes several of these experiences. (2)
Furthermore, the speaker encounters a field of daffodils that
he describes as "jocund company." (3) Later, as the speaker
reflects on seeing the cheerful daffodils, he says the
memory gives him great joy. (4) The speaker realizes that
the memory of the flowers provides a more powerful
emotional experience than the experience itself did.
"Finally" should be added to the beginning of sentence 1.
In sentence 2, "furthermore" should be changed to
"specifically."
In sentence 3, "later" should be changed to "therefore."
"Moreover" should be added to the beginning of sentence