Can someone revise my draft really well. Its a document, so just click on it. It will only work if you have word. Please help ASAP This is due today and I can't fail.

The first three points are what they (the cats) are related to, how they seem to act, and how they are throughout the story. These points will help explain the differences in the story. In "The Golden Cat" the cat is related to the sun, but in "The Cat and The Moon" the cat is being compared to the moon.

The cat in "the golden cat" acts like the sun because he watches over people. The cat in "the cat and the moon" does not seem to care as much about people, similar to how the moon feels to some people.The line "he makes the fields and meadows purr" in "the golden cat" describes the cat is wonderful. The cat in the "cat and the moon" is described as being scared. This can be seen in the lines "the pure cold light in the sky trouble his animal blood. Minnaloushe runs in the grass."

There are two more points on the differences. The cat in the "golden cat" acts domestic, but the other cats in the cat and the moon act absolutely different.

Explanation:

Best way to edi was to rewrite the sentences for you. hope this helps.

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you didn't provide the passage.

explanation:

seeing as this is your first question on i can see why you may have not known that you need to provide the passage.

without the passage, or even the name of the passage, we can not read the passage, therefore we can not determine when or how the pacing effects the tone.

however, you can either repost this question (providing the passage this time)

or you can comment below what the passage is, and i'll you to the best of my ability!