Do you see today’s society heading toward a dystopia similar to that of Fahrenheit 451?? (Need paragraphs)

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

Which is included in the radio broadcast to capture the listener's attention that the original text of the story is not able to include

That alligator hungry. vittles very scarce that time a season. his belly be pinchin him hard, now. but bruh deer is fat, and so he is in heavy trouble. the alligator there in front of him. the beagles there behind him. what bruh deer gone do? he sees the alligator and he hears the beagles. how does the author readers understand what the word pinchin means?