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English, 22.05.2020 01:09 kadeWayne

One night I was sleeping and I woke up. I could not move at all. I tried to go back to sleep but then someone was whispering in my ear. I opened my eyes and then I got so scared there was this old woman standing at the end of my bed. Her face looked like it had been rotting and her teeth were yellow.
Some teeth were missing. I used to have this experience but it was different. For some reason. This felt different. I closed my eyes then I heard whispering again.
I opened my eyes and she got closer. The old woman was standing on my bed looking down on me. Her eyes were as black as coal. I was scared to close my eyes. Because I was afraid she would get closer.
I started getting worried then. I saw a black shadow on the wall. It started walking toward me. He got closer every minute. Then it put its hand on my eyes.
Its hands were so cold. I tried to get his hand off me but I could not move or say any word. He moved his hand. The old woman was on top of me with a creepy smile. I was so scared I thought to myself, “Wow I am really going to die”
I started trying to move. I managed to move my fingers a little bit and then I woke up. I was gasping for air. I told my mom and dad what happened but then they just laughed at me and said it was a dream. Then my parents told me to go back to bed.
I was angry at my parents. But I went back to bed and then I heard whispering again but I did not open my eyes at all and continued sleeping. Then it stopped. I no longer heard the whispering. I just kept remembering these words, “If I die at least I will go to heaven”
That is when it all stopped. I went to school and all day I could not learn anything at all. I don’t get the dreams anymore though.

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