What is the BEST way, if any, to revise Sentence (5)?

A) Leave the sentence as is.

B) Through my participation in these activities and various community service projects, I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and commitment.

C) Personal responsibility, teamwork, and to be committed through my participation in these activities and various community service projects are things that I have learned.

Eliminate

D) I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and to be committed through my participation in these activities and various community service projects,

B) Through my participation in these activities and various community service projects, I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and commitment.

Explanation:

A sentence is a group of words that gives precise and complete meaning. It is concise, consisting of a main clause and probably one or more subordinate clauses. It could be in the form of a command, a statement, a request etc.

A main clause contains subject, object and predicate. This makes a main clause to give a complete meaning. But a subordinate clause contains a subject and a verb, and cannot give a complete meaning.

To revise the given sentence, it is best written as:

Through my participation in these activities and various community service projects, I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and commitment.

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