Italization and Comma Usage
Write three to five sentences explaining what should be
done to edit this paragraph for errors.
hen I realized that I was
me to the conclusion
, too long and too
und drive North to the
I love and shady trees.
Summer.

To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word August should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. Finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which I love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers.