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Benjamin Franklin, by Eduardo Mata and a Shocking and stormy night, by Prentice Newton. Eduardo's text is informational. The text Benjamin Franklin is about to tell us how Benjamin knew that lighting was electricity. While Prentice's text is to entertain the reader's it shows how a character saw one of his neighbors out at night while there was a thunderstorm and he was flying a kite. Eduardo used third point of view, While Prentice Newton used first point of view and the tone he used was frightening, shocked. their word choice was different. Eduardo uses exiting words to grab the reader's attention, whereas Prentice Newton uses interesting, and similes, for example, when the character said: "It glowed as if on fire". The two texts make interesting events they are kind of the same because they both talked about the kites getting electrocuted.

Benjamin Franklin, by Eduardo Mata and a Shocking and Stormy night, by Prentice Newton. Mata's text is informational. The text Benjamin Franklin is about to tell us how Benjamin knew that lighting was electricity. While Newton's text is meant to entertain the reader, it shows how a character saw one of his neighbors out at night while there was a thunderstorm, and Franklin was flying a kite. Mata used the third point of view, while  Newton used the first point of view, and the tone he used was frightening and shocked. Their word choice was different. Mata uses exiting words to grab the reader's attention, whereas Prentice Newton uses interesting similes. For example, when the character said, "It glowed as if on fire". The two texts are similar because they both talked about the kites getting electrocuted.

Explanation:

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the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.