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Where's your evidence/quote?
what are you persuading your audience to do/not to do? Right now, this sounds like an informative essay, not a persuasive/argumentative essay.
Where is the thesis statement? What are you asking your audience to do/not to do in order to solve the problem of animal abuse?
Seems like you're trying to fit your entire essay into your intro. Your intro should just have a background in your topic.
What does this have to do with the rest of your essay? Feels off-topic.

What has the designer done to the reader identify key points in the ballot shown in section i?

Wiesel's speech begins after auschwitz the human condition is not the same nothing will be the same identify where similar language is repeated later in his speech what is the effect of this repetition

Match each persuasive technique with the excerpt that uses it. expert opinion association emotional appeal scientific data compared to the yearly average of 6.5 million square kilometers between 1979 and 2010 for september, the arctic sea ice shrank below 4 million square kilometers in september 2012, which is lower than any minimum value observed in the last three decades. (european environmental agency, “the melting arctic") arrowright according to morten olsen, chair of a recent arctic council assessment of changes on arctic snow-and ice-conditions, "changes in the climate and cryosphere risk fundamentally altering the arctic ecosystems." (european environmental agency, “the melting arctic") arrowright sip a cup of turbo brown to taste the liberating power of flying through your day's work like a cruising jet. arrowright if we don't step up our efforts, the melodious songs of these beautiful birds might be silenced forever. arrowright