Please help...thank you

- the heat nearly killed them that first summer.

but it is sometime nessary to hit key points or subjects   but is sometimes to much reveiw if there was a way to slim down the redone work it would improve for every body.

a. to introduce the audience to important characters .

b. to inform the audience where the story takes place .

e. to lay out specific details about different plot points.

are you asking for advice? if so, i think its great! i like how you gave specific details. i think you will get a good grade on it!