Could someone help restate my thesis statement? Here it is: Animals should not be in cages because of isolation from the real world, pressure, and high mortality rates.

People debate whether it is cruel for animals be in cages or not. It is terrifying that people keep animals in cages.  It is inhumane to keep animals in cages because it is terrible for them to be kept in small isolated areas, such as cages. To situate animals in cages is also affects them socially, making them less friendly and trusting. It is cruel to animals because taking too many animals from their natural habitat and keeping them in captivity is not only bad for that particular animal, but it also affects the environment and can cause terrible species changes and even extinctions.

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i think the answer would mist likely be an adjective clause, because unhappy is an adjective.