22:19 How can Juana best revise the text to help draw in new
clients?
Juana is building a new website for her event-planning
business and wants to include some persuasive text that
helps her draw in new clients. Read Juana's draft.
Everyone likes a party, but planning one is hard work! Why
not leave the hard work to us? Picture Perfect Parties has
experience planning events of all sizes and can help you
make your dream event a reality. Sit back and leave it all to
us. We can plan and manage your event from start to
finish. We also offer partial planning and day-of
coordination for large events. Our clever and crafty touches
will make your party picture perfect!
by stating her main idea at the beginning of the
paragraph
by making unsupported claims about her competitors
by offering a special discount to first-time customers
by choosing information that is more appropriate to the
topic