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the happiest day of my life was our tour of the ark encounter. We went on vacation to

the beautiful state of Kentucky for an annual family vacation. It was the most amazing

experience we all have ever had. Our day started very humid and hot. We all got ready,

and had breakfast. And we where out the door by 10 in the morning

We arrived to Williamston Kentucky at about 11am so we we could purchase our tickets

and tour information. Upon arrival we where amazed at how big that ark really was, but

we where more shooken by the people their waiting in line. We found a parking spot as

soon as we could, but that was a one of the biggest struggles. So we decided i would get

off and wait in line, and my husband and kids would go find a parking spot and wait for

me to get closer to the ticket booth.

So after about an hour in line, it was time to start the adventure. We where all very

excited. We waited for the tour guide and bus to take us to the ark. When we finally got

to the ark. I was amazed and humbled at how small we are next to God's creations. I

could not help but to cry and thank God for his divine mercy on me. We finally went

inside and our mouths dropped to the floor in astonishment.

When we started walking around we noticed that it was 3 floors high. Everything was

made of gopher wood. Their was every type of animal that you could never imagine

excisted. There where scenes of Noa and his family on how they lived and how they

would cook. And how they would feed the animals and keep them calm in there cages.

We also interacted with a lot of animals that they had their. The kids where able to feed

lambs,alpacas, lamas and so many other animals. We started to get hungry, but the only

on site restuarant was full with a very long waiting line so we waited until we left back

home. We decided to take some family pictures next to the ark, and behind was a

beautiful mountain site where we all thought was the perfect scenery. Afterwards we

went to the gift shop and purchased gifts for our family members and ourselves. In

conclusion we had the most amazing day at the ark encounter and we hope to go back

one day and take other family members and share our '.​

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