The following is a sample thesis. The underlined portion needs revision and clarity. Revise to strengthen the claim being presented. Consumers are easily fooled by advertisements because they always want more stuff and are willing to pay for it.

However, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. what would be the best way to revise this sentence for greater clarity? a) however, the fact that columbus left spain thousands of years after people settled what would become the united states never dawned on me. b) it never dawned on me, however, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain. c) however, the fact that people were already living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. d) however, the idea never dawned on me that long before columbus ever left spain, real-life people lived for thousands of years in what would become the united states.

Which lines from the passage suggest that macbeth is honorable, courageous, and well liked by his peers?

Write 3 sentences about an animal of your choice