Identify the unclear pronoun references in the following paragraph and rewrite the passage so that all pronoun references are clear. In the information age, you have to send, receive, and process huge numbers of messages every day. But effective communication is about more than just exchanging information. It is also about understanding the emotion behind it. This can make one’s communication more clear with others. It can improve relationships at home, work, and in social situations by deepening one’s connections to others. These can enable one to communicate even negative or difficult messages without creating conflict of destroying trust.

Prewriting: this stage of the writing process involve gathering and selecting ideas; teachers can students in several ways: creating lists, researching, brainstorming,reading to discover more about the author's style, talking, collecting memorabilia or clips from other texts, and free-writingdrafting: in this stage, students begin writing, connecting, and developing ideasrevising: this is the stage of writing that involves rewriting or "re-seeing; " emphasis is place on examining sentence structure, word choice, voice, and organization of the pieceediting: this stage involves checking for style and conventions--spelling, grammar, usage, and punctuationpublishing: the "going public" stage of writingevaluating: in this stage, the writer looks back at his/her work and self-evaluates, and the audience evaluates the effectiveness of the writingwriting activities : personal writing, workplace writing, subject writing, creative writing, persuasive writing, and scholarly writingpeer review: acting a referee; evaluating a colleague's work professionally