Which phrase should be revise for a more parallel sentence? Pet canaries need large cages wouldn't parties some fresh water and keep out of cold

Keep out of cold

Explanation:

A phrase is a collection of words which holds a concept ad can be used as a unit in a sentence.

The phrase that should be revised for a more parallel sentence is "keep out of cold" because if others are blocked out, it wouldn't make a proper sentence as it would look something like, "pet canaries need keep out of cold".

Properly revising it would look like, "pet canaries need to be kept out of the cold"

3rd person, because the narrator is out of the story but explains the feeling of the main character